Sunday, September 13, 2009

Alternate Endings



I've been working on different endings to the story to make it a little more satisfying, so here's what I have come up with:

1) The version posted previously where we end on the angry dog.
2) The bone box is revealed to have no more bones, and we cut to the dog hanging his head in sadness. There is a close up of Mother Hubbard's face, and she snickers at her joke on the little dog. Suddenly her face changes to surprise and we cut to the dog biting and tearing at her slipper in revenge.







3) The bone box is revealed to have no more bones, and we cut to the dog hanging his head in sadness. He is so sad, he then flops to the floor, unconsolable.





4) The bone box is revealed to have no more bones, and we look down from Mother Hubbard's height at the sad puppy. Then, we look up at Mother Hubbard, and she shakes the last bone she had hidden behind her back. We look to the dog who leaps up in joy.




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